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Spare Change by ~Reidsan:iconReidsan:





Spare change? She asked, and I sighed,
but there was something about her face
that meant I just couldn't lie. As I fumbled
in my pockets she fumbled in hers, and
with barely a slur she said excuse me,
one moment, got to sort out my rat. Frankly,
I was somewhat shocked at that, but
I've got one myself and they're not as bad
as everyone says. With care, she lifted him
and cradled him in her skinny arms, mothering
her rat from all the world, protected from harm,
the rat squeaked back a child full of rodenty charm,
while I tried to keep my mind firmly on money,
in case she thought I thought she was funny,
and I pulled out a two-pound coin and handed it over.

For a moment or so, she didn't notice,
but soon she thanked me and went
on her way to wherever homeless people go
when they walk away. Then, later that day,
I got to the station for the train home, and
noticed I was missing my pass. I sighed,
bought another and felt a bit of a ass,
but then I thought perhaps she'd picked it up,
that I threw her a bone when she was down,
out of luck, walking the streets one rat away
from alone, and I couldn't help but smile
until I got home.
©2005-2009 ~Reidsan
:iconreidsan:

Author's Comments

original notes: Submitting this to urban as it relates to my experiences with the city. If you want hiphop, this ain't it.

I know a (probably) homeless woman on Covent Garden by sight. I like her, but she seems a little scared of me. This isn't a true story but it's written for her...and for what it's worth, in my head, I call her Michaela.

2009 notes: hmm. not happy with this one. erring just this side of delete.

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:iconreidsan:
They're oddly cute sometimes, aren't they?

Although the wild ones can be right bastards, I've heard.

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I do writing. Do you do reading?
:icondeathrages:
No, what i mean is there are people whom thinks that way... i definately don't though, but anyway, maybe my way of interprating it is not the same???? ;P

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Errr... I dunno how to sign from here =.=
:iconswitchbladejen:
Major kudos :D I love this one...my heart really goes out to "Michaela"

*favouritzes*

<3 xxxxxx

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:iconreidsan:
I'm sure she'll be alright, her partner is made out of bricks and facial hair, and her dog's even scarier.

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I do writing. Do you do reading?
:iconlocame:
I've never thought of that before...where DO homeless people go when they walk away? Hmm...

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Are you stalking me? Because that would be super.
:iconreidsan:
I saw her again on Thursday. Her and her partner must have walked to Tottenham Court Road from Covent Garden, so maybe she keeps moving about London, forever and ever. I wonder what she dreams about.

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I do writing. Do you do reading?
:iconlocame:
How would you like it if all you ever did was move from one place to another, never with any direction or meaning?

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Are you stalking me? Because that would be super.
:iconreidsan:
In a way, that's all any of us do. Just some of us have food, water, beds, and so forth to do it with.

It'd be terrible to be homeless, though. I couldn't do it. Well, I could maybe do it for one night, but I still couldn't do it.

I can't stop thinking about Michaela lately. I hope she's alright.

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I do writing. Do you do reading?
:iconlocame:
I guess you're right, but I prefer not to think of myself as just a meanderer. I tell myself there is meaning to my goals, if only for peace of mind.

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Are you stalking me? Because that would be super.
:iconbethuel09:
this is very nice...:) poem is awesome I like that you chose such an awesome subject a homeless person...

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~Certainty of death, small chance of sucess, what are we waiting for?~ Gimli son of Gloin

~hmm I suppose that concludes negotiations~ Gimli son of Gloin

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