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Broken Clock

by ~Reidsan

All the time that slips through your fingers sits here with me where it can malinger
Within two and a half hands and a face without eyes
Time stands still, where it usually flies.

The steady tick-tock-tick
as seconds frift through the air
passing with little but a pendulum fanfare
Itīs neither here nor there,
hither nor thither,
And with every minute that sneaks by
The clock tells another lie.

Itīs half-past-seven-to-eleven-and-a-quarter-past-the-hour.
Why donīt the trapped days break out
in a temporal shower,

savouring every iota of power they have
on every life dependent on a clock
like mine, but unbroken?
When did our fate pass into punctual choking,
and when did we all commit the deed, unspoken,
that bound us to be Timeīs whore forevermore?

It is our fate to live in fear of being late,
or ceasing to be up to date, but not here.
The hours run in circles and the days are unclear,
instewad of confusion, this fills me with cheer
that I shold be in a place
where infinite instance doesnīt seem so queer.

After all, itīs hard to plan or stay on the ball
when all you have are false minutes crucified on your wall.
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The clock in my villa´s room was broken. This was as good an inspiration as anything else I´ve found.

Sorry if this is bad, it was more a distraction than a purposeful creation. The other poem I wrote about my room is Dolls, and that goes up in a sec.

2009 notes: nearly deleted for obvious-ish reasons, but I do love some of the imagery. may edit.
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:iconyfighter2:
rofl this may be relevant to your interests

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CONGRATULATIONS, CONGRATULATIONS, CONGRATULATIONS! You know why?
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:iconlocame:
It amazes me how you can find inspiration from something so seemingly...well...uninspirational. Bravo.

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:iconreidsan:
I think that broken clocks are pretty inspirational, to be honest. It took me a day to work out that the hour hand was stuck on 6...it was most misleading.

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:iconlocame:
It amazes me how you can find inspiration from something so seemingly...well...uninspirational. Bravo.

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:iconcleocatra:
Still the most awesome poetry.

I can see what you've been doing in Spain.

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I'm so British, I shit monocles.
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:iconreidsan:
Yes. Hiding in internet cafes.

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:iconcleocatra:
Off to Ireland soon...

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I'm so British, I shit monocles.
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:iconchizbe:
I like it, good job

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All alone she sits and stares, and thoughts flow through her beautifully complex mind, to quick for her to realise...
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:iconreidsan:
thanks

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~DeathRages Aug 3, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
ooo... This is awesomo!!! neva thought clocks could be a subject, but its really cool!!! :D

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